English Class: Extra Credit Essay

July 27, 2014

MaKenzie Beck

Extra Credit Essay: Hysteria

Behind Hysteria

Ted Lavine’s video “Hysteria” is a non-linear story that follows the random motions of a seemingly insane young women. This video is both compelling and confusing because it gives the viewer a chance witness something unusual as well as analyze the meaning.

In the video, through a compilation of out of order clips, the viewer sees a young women running around a room and playing in the bed covers almost looking like a lunatic, blowing up a balloon that eventually pops and washing her face with cream in the bathroom while skipping from the process of a older women cleaning the floor and we see laundry being done. The choppy back and forth  of the video compels the viewer, and tends to make the viewer feel confused and unsettled. But when dissecting the video and placing it into a linear form one is able to see past the confusion to new meaning. One way to place the events of the video would be in this order: the young women, main character of the story, is jumping around barefoot on a hardwood flooring of a bedroom. She then begins blowing up a balloon until it is so full it pops and the pieces are scattered on the floor around the her toes. She is then in the bathroom franticly washing her face with cream, she stares at her reflection in the mirror, and begins to smile. The next clip would be the young women walking down the hall and entering a bedroom where she begins to wildly run around, jumps on the bed and rolls around underneath the covers all while laughing hysterically for no apparent reason. The young women then seems to become agitated, she breaths heavy and starts pulling at her hair, neck, arms and clothing, unable to satisfy the issue in her mind as the sounds (images) of cleaning housework surround her.

The concept of hysteria is often identified as “an uncontrollable outburst of emotion or fear, often characterized by irrationality, laughter, weeping,etc.”1  this characterization is seen in the young women in Levine’s video, as she is shown to laugh for no visible reason, but is also seemingly uncontrollable and her emotions change with outbursts. A further look into the concept of hysteria helps one understand that up through the nineteenth century, it was a common medical diagnosis for womens and that the symptoms often included “faintness, nervousness, sexual desire, ... shortness of breath, irritability... and "a tendency to cause trouble"2, But it was later decided that hysteria, was actually just a way to for medical professionals to refer to a woman's sexual frustration. 3

This is why I placed Lavine’s video in the order I did, I felt that the events related to each other allowed the viewer to understand the young woman's sexual frustration. The balloon popping in the beginning had the effect of pushing the women into a “fit”. While cleaning her face in the bathroom she think of the balloon popping and visualizes the climax of intercourse. Then as she wildly goes about jumping on the bed and playing in the covers it is as if she is envisioning and going through the motions of coitus (think of her interaction with the camera as her partner). Then when she becomes agitate by the surrounding sounds of housework it isn’t really the housework bothering her but the built up sextual frustration she hasn’t been able to release.

Both the video in its nonlinear original form and my linear plot interpretation cater to the understanding of hysteria, the video introduces how a hysterical women is perceived, and my addition helps one understand reason a woman becomes hysterical.

Cited Work

Levine, Ted. Hysteria

May 6, 2010

http://vimeo.com/11518555

1) Dictionay.com http://dictionary.reference.com/browse/hysteria?s=t

2) Female hysteria http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Female_hysteria

3) Hysteria http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Hysteria

Scholarship Essay

§  Describe your academic accomplishments and/or relatable employment experiences. Discuss any awards and honors you have received, involvement in school activities, and or/athletic or club participation.



MaKenzie Beck
August 9th,2014

As a homeschooler there were not a lot of academic accomplishments to pursue growing up and as a shy individual I did not seek out the kind of opportunities to insure an exciting resume during my high school years. However when I was sixteen, I was able to muster up my courage and join my hometown’s high school track team. While participating in track I learned a lot about myself: I discovered a passion for running that I still enjoy today, but more importantly I learned the life lesson of what it is like to start at the bottom and the perseverance required to succeed with reaching goals.

I joined track with the intent to run mid/long distance, but on the first day of practice, when I could not run a complete lap, I became aware of how bad a runner I actually was. On this first day, and many times after, the “quitting” thought crossed my mind, but every time I shut that thought down because I knew my only option was to keep going. Through that first season and the seasons to follow, I had many monumental moments: my first race when I finally was able to run the required two lap distance. The first time I ran the mile race and did not come in last. The times I did not do my best or the time I simply gave up and walked off the track in the middle of a race-the haunting disappointment of these incidents became my driving point. The first time I placed at a meet. And then when I became a valuable member of the team because I was a competitor. Each time I was faster than my previous best race or had a stronger finish. Every moment from my track career was a piece of the life lesson I came away with: That through desire, discipline and determination success can be achieved.

I may have missed out on academic accomplishments as a homeschooler, but my participation in track, the dedication required to start at nothing to eventually lettering, more than once, was an irreplaceable growing experience for me. Track pushed my limits and as a result I take with me the life lesson: to achieve a goal one must work hard and persevere. 

Scholarship Essay

§  Discuss whether or not you believe community involvement is important. How do you get involved in your community?

MaKenzie Beck

August, 9th, 2014

At the age of eighteen I moved away from home and left my family, friends and everything familiar behind, to take a nanny job five hundred miles away. I tended to an infant nine hours a day and quickly discovered that I needed to find a social life for my mental and emotional well being, thus I sought out community. Because of work conflicts I was not able to be as involved with community as I would have liked, but I still found a sense of belonging and companionship through online “Meetup” groups, random volunteer opportunities, work “play dates”, and church involvement. The online “Meetup” groups set a platform for individuals seeking companionship with people of similar interests such as hiking, photography, culture. Though I did not utilize these groups to the extent I wish I could have, I was able to come across individuals I found interesting and have growing experiences. I found volunteer opportunities at a shelter for battered women, and would join in on random fundraising events. Work “play dates” were nice because it allowed me to befriend other nannies and moms who also needed companionship for their sanity, while having their main focus on the growth of the child. Church was where I was the most involved; In turn, I served as a secretary for the women’s classes, a greeter for newcomers, and was a committee member in charge of organizing the activities for young adults. Through these church services I was able to meet people and make friends that led to other community involvement invitations. Through my involvement in community I was introduced to opportunities previously unknown and was able to apply myself to new life experiences. Community gave me the chance to grow as a person, make acquaintances with great people and find friends I will value for the rest of my life.

Based on my experiences, I believe involvement in one’s community is important because it allows individuals to connect with others and grow, whether through hobbies, profession or faith. And I would say the best way to get involved with community is by finding opportunities that cater to one’s interests, this could be a quilting group, a daycare volunteer program or church activities. When getting involved it is important to be open to the opportunities that present themselves, because the ability to be part of a community is a strength one can take throughout the rest of life. 

Scholorship Essay

§  Tell us about your future plans and goals. Why have you chosen your field of study? What will you do after you finish your education at NWC?

MaKenzie Beck

August, 9th, 2014

It may go without saying, that at the moment my goal is to attend college and get, at the least, a bachelor’s degree. While at college it is my plan to learn as much as I can and start the process of being a lifelong student and engulfing myself in every possible experience. I plan to start working on the creation of my career during and after college with the ultimate goal being, to work for National Geographic as a photographer and/or writer. I know throughout my life I will continue to create new goals and plans to obtain them, but at the moment I see myself enjoying life as an adventure writer/photographer till the point I will want to lead a calm life.  I assume at some point I will want to settle down and hope to either continue in my education or give back to my community by becoming a teacher of some sort, but I believe this plan is still a far way off and does not need details yet.

            I have chosen to pursue journalism because I think it will be beneficial to my goal of being a lifelong student, but it also contains the three dream careers of my childhood: photographer, traveler, and writer.  My first childhood dream was to be a photographer; I fell in love with the concept that I could capture beautiful, sad or unique, moments in an image and preserve them for others to experience. Then I wanted to travel the world, but not just travel and stay in four star hotels, I wanted to engulf myself in cultures and situations foreign to me, to eat food most Americans would gag at, and gain an understanding of and fall in love with everything I see. My third dream was to be a writer, to tell stories and help others learn and feel through what I had written. Journalism is the doorway for making my dreams since childhood come true while also catering to my adult desire for a practical education and career path.

After I graduate from Northwest College my goal is to continue my education at a four year university, ideally The University of Wyoming. I plan to continue my journalism education and hopefully minor in international relations. I plan to participate in internships and work the university newspaper.  I hope to travel and maybe study abroad. After I finish my education at NWC, is it my goal to continue to learn as much as I can and also gain vast and unique experiences in my life that will lead to my professional goals of being a world-class journalist and photographer.

English Class Essay:Argument/Position Essay

MaKenzie Beck

July 24, 2014

Argument/Position Essay

Citizen’s Right

Guns, a topic often accompanied by passionate opinions. For years the issue of gun control has been a concern in the United States for the individuals who believe in gun rights and for those who believe in their restrictions. There is the debate between those that think too many guns with little restriction through law adds to more violence and danger in society and then those who believe that violence will be bad weather restrictions are put on guns or not, but feel that firearms add to the individuals’ chances of protection. This desire for protection is where carrying concealed handguns lends assistance. Most law abiding citizens who carry concealed guns, do not do so with the intent to go and shoot someone, but rather they carry as a precaution, in the off chance someone threatens them they have protection. The end to this gun debate will not be seen for a long time, because there will always be people on one side who believe that guns are dangerous and should be abolished, and those on the other side who know guns are dangerous but understand them as a tool of protection.  I feel it is important that law abiding citizens have the right to carry concealed handguns, because when danger arises it is often up to the individuals to protect themselves and those around them.

Law abiding citizens who carry concealed handguns have the ability to protect as well as prevent/stop killing sprees. There are numerous accounts of lives saved because an individual was a carry concealed permit holder “When Kevin Mclaughlin entered the Dollar General in Orrville, Alabama, he probably did not expect it would be the last thing he would ever do. Brandishing a pistol, the man began herding people into the breakroom. But concealed permit holder Marlo Ellis waited until the right moment to gun down the potential murderer, which led many to call him a ‘Good Samaritan’ and a truehero.”(Becker) The lives saved that day were a blessing, but it also brings to mind the many massacres that have taken place in the U.S. through the years and one tends to ask the question, if one of those victims would have been carrying would loved ones still be alive. I do believe the killing sprees casualties would not have been as great if the at least one of the victims were carrying.

Unlike myself, gun control activists believe that having a carry concealed permit makes handguns more accessible to various citizens, and thus allows the crime rate to increase. This is a valid fear, when dangerous weapons become more accessible, dangerous people will find ways to acquire and use them. Plus when one understands that every state in the U.S. has their own requirements to obtain a carry conceal permit, it allows individuals who should not have the privilege of carrying get one. This gives pause to concerned individuals, the thought that people who may cause harm intentional or accidental, is a scary thought! A key example of this fear coming true was in two thousand and eleven Simons, a North Carolina man, was riding bicycles with his family when a man in an SUV named Diez started hassling them. Simons came to a stop on his bike followed by the vehicle. Simons walked over to the vehicle to talk with the Diez, but what he found was Diez holding a gun to his face and threatening to “shoot” and “kill” him. Then when Simons turned to leave he heard a bang, the bullet went through his bike helmet, miraculously just missing Simons left ear. (LUO) Diez is exactly the kind of person one does not want carrying a concealed weapon because without a reason he was ready to kill an innocent man in front of his family.  I understand the gun control activists desire to limit gun control because of this story, I would not want mentally unstable individuals like Diez who could flip out and threaten a life at any moment have the power of a gun.

 In continuing his article, about the danger of carrying concealed, MICHAEL LUO wrote “Mr. Diez, as it turned out, was one of more than 240,000 people in North Carolina with a permit to carry a concealed handgun… The New York Times examined the permit program in North Carolina, one of a dwindling number of states where the identities of permit holders remain public. The review, encompassing the last five years, offers a rare, detailed look at how a liberalized concealed weapons law has played out in one state... More than 2,400 permit holders were convicted of felonies or misdemeanors, excluding traffic-related crimes, over the five-year period, The Times found when it compared databases of recent criminal court cases and licensees. While the figure represents a small percentage of those with permits, more than 200 were convicted of felonies, including at least 10 who committed murder or manslaughter. All but two of the killers used a gun.” (Luo). Though the situation Simons had to face was awful, and there are more like it, in his article Luo references a New York Times statistics on the carry concealed in North Carolina but the credibility of these statistics as Nick Leghorn in his article, ‘NY Times Proves Concealed Carry License Holders More Law-Abiding Than the Population. Unintentionally.’, points out  “this analysis is based on the Times’numbers which they stated without referencing any sources, leaving us to take their word for their validity and leaving us no ability to double check their work.”(Leghorn) the lack of facts and citations in the Time’s article reflects Luo’s article and marks it untrustworthy.

Carrying a concealed handgun is sometimes crucial to one’s individual safety, especially for women. Though it is important to call the police, one must take into consideration that the average response time is ten minutes (APB Staff), that is crucial time, so one must take precautions to protect their individual needs.  In Washington, since two thousand and five, more than one hundred thousand of the four hundred and fifty one thousand, residents who are allowed to carry concealed handguns are women, “a common concern... with women who carry: the importance of self-defense.” (Rosenthal). These women are admirable, they understand that danger is always a possibility and that their safety and life may depend on a carry concealed handgun.

The gun control activist and founder of Moms Demand Action, Shannon Watts recently wrote an article about how gun laws are not helping women safety. She states “American women are 11 times more likely to be murdered with guns than women in other high-income countries. On average, 46 women are shot to death by a current or former husband or boyfriend every month. And those mass shootings that that occur in America with startling regularity? Fifty-seven percent of them involve domestic violence.” (Watts) Watts may have a point with the statistics, but she makes women seem like helpless beings who simply sicum to abuse. Women in America are just as capable of carrying a gun for their protection as a man is for offencive purposes. Another thing Watts does not mention is that if a man wants to hurt a women, with or without a gun, he will find a way. “If there were no assault weapons available and no this or no that, this guy is going to find something, right?,” (GOLDBERG). Men are simply the stronger more aggressive sex and every women should be able to defend herself from them. When women carry concealed handguns they allow themselves a  fighting chance to protect and defend their well being.

It is my opinion that the privilege to carry a concealed handgun, belongs to every law abiding citizen, because it is their right to protect themselve and others from danger.  Guns are dangerous and can be harmful if placed in the wrong hands, as gun control activist believe and are right in doing so. Individuals do get threatened, hurt, and killed when guns are found in the wrong hands, however the solution to this is not applying stricter gun laws, but rather to make the use of carry concealed handguns common for law abiding citizens so that more people can protect themselves. Whether one uses a carry concealed handgun to protect the individuals surrounding them from a massacre or the weapon is a tool of self defence one has the ability to protect and that is every law abiding citizen’s right.

Cited Work

Becker, “Armed Man Gathers People Together in Dollar General Breakroom, but Concealed Carry Holder Saves Them”

http://www.ijreview.com/2014/03/125342-armed-man-gathers-people-together-dollar-general-breakroom-concealed-carry-holder-saves/

 Luo, “Guns in Public, and Out of Sight”

http://www.nytimes.com/2011/12/27/us/more-concealed-guns-and-some-are-in-the-wrong-hands.html?pagewanted=all&_r=1&

 Leghorn, “NY Times Proves Concealed Carry License Holders More Law-Abiding Than the Population. Unintentionally.”

http://www.thetruthaboutguns.com/2011/12/foghorn/ny-times-uses-deceptive-statistics-to-promote-anti-gun-agenda-again/

APB Staff, “Response times- city to city”

http://apbweb.com/featured-articles/1188-response-times-city-to-city.html

Rosenthal, “State's concealed-carry permits skyrocket, especially for women”

http://seattletimes.com/html/localnews/2023740786_concealedcarryrisexml.html

Watts , “Why Aren't We Doing More to Keep Women Safe From Gun Violence?”

http://www.huffingtonpost.com/shannon-watts/why-arent-we-doing-more-t_b_5433869.html

Goldberg, “The Case for More Guns (and More Gun Control)”

http://www.theatlantic.com/magazine/archive/2012/12/the-case-for-more-guns-and-more-gun-control/309161/

English Class Essay:Literary Analysis Essay

MaKenzie Beck

July 16th, 2014

Literary Analysis Essay

The Power of Point of View

A Literary Analysis Essay of: “They’re Made Out of Meat”

“What in the world am I reading” was the first thought that came to mind as my eyes traveled across the black words that contrasted a white background, but as I continued to read I felt my facial muscles flex into a smile and I could not take my eyes from the conversation unfolding before me. “They’re Made Out of Meat” by Terry Bisson is, as I quickly discovered, an enjoyable short story about the seemingly excruciating difficulties two extraterrestrial beings face when dealing with other life forms. This story is original and entertaining because the author chose to highlight certain literary components to let the reader witness a different perspective. The key literary component in “They’re Made Out of Meat” is the point of view, because without this element the story would lack its captivating originality.

            “They’re Made Out of Meat” is a clever short story about the dilemma aliens face when dealing with humans for the first time, but what makes this story alluring is that it is presented from the unique point of view of aliens. The story by Terry Bisson is about two extraterrestrial beings discussing, as one explains to the other, the unusual characteristics of humans and then the  issue of whether or not, to make further contact.  "Yes, thinking meat! Conscious meat! Loving meat. Dreaming meat. The meat is the whole deal! Are you beginning to get the picture or do I have to start all over?" (Terry Bisson), with this quote, one is able to understand how the human race is perceived by the aliens: humans have the ability to think, love and dream, but in the end they are still just meat. This helps the reader understand the limited and somewhat discriminate view the aliens have of humans and sets up the platform for the alien’s conflict to respond to the humans’ effort to make extraterrestrial contact.  As the conversation of these two extraterrestrial beings continues, the reader comes to understand that this specific race of aliens are quite intelligent and have taken a scientific approach to discovering various life forms throughout the universe, so when the race made of meat is discovered the aliens decide that   "Officially, we are required to contact, welcome and log in any and all sentient races or multibeings in this quadrant of the Universe, without prejudice, fear or favor. Unofficially, I advise that we erase the records and forget the whole thing." (Bisson). With this thought these aliens decide that the meat, unlike other life forms of the universe, is not worth the time and effort that can be used elsewhere and thus take the initiative and disregard all information pertaining to the meat and their planet. The aliens point of view towards humans in this story presents a new, enjoyable, outlook to how humans may appear and present the theme of not judging based on prejudices.

“They’re Made Out of Meat” is a compelling story because the point of view is presented through the dialogue of the two narrative characters. When analyzing the point of view it is important to note that point of view is “the position of the narrator in relation to the story, as indicated by the narrator's outlook fromwhich the events are depicted and by the attitude toward the characters.”  That is, point of view is the attitude the story’s narrator has towards his connection to the story and how he sees characters and events.  A point of view is often formed by the beliefs and past experiences of the narrator. The narrators in “They’re Made Out of Meat” have their opinions about the humans based on their own history of growing up alien and developing beliefs from their cultural elements. The author used the alien’s point of view in this story as a literacy tool to, in a sense, persuade the reader to see through the alien’s eyes by having the aliens be present and speak in first person form. The use of dialogue in “They’re Made Out of Meat” gives the reader an “eavesdroppers” insight, meaning there is no actual description of location or appearances, but enough information is given to infer a Sci-Fi setting and understand the narrators’ limited and biased point of view. In their conversation one alien explains to the other the unique makeup of the humans they have examined, "You're not understanding, are you? You're refusing to deal with what I'm telling you. The brain does the thinking. The meat." (Bisson). The use of point of view in this story is entertaining, but I do not find myself emotionally affected by how the story is conversationally brought about mainly because I do not find the idea of the alien narrators to be credible, thus it is simply and enjoyable story.

In the extremely entertaining short story “They’re Made Out of Meat” by Terry Bisson, the point of view is the most useful literary too, because it has the ability to engage the reader with its use of first person present tense, and convince the reader to be open minded and to see the story unfold through the filter of the alien characters eyes. The point of view helps the reader appreciate the theme of not being prejudice, enjoy the opinions of the alien characters and understand the inferred extraterrestrial setting. In his story Bisson, used point of view to help his readers  enjoy a charming story about how alien life forms first view humans and then the perplexity of how to deal with them. But Bisson was also able to individualize the extraterrestrial characters and the difficult situations to a point that the reader has the ability to, without realizing, relate to the characters. I believe it is safe to say that without Terry Bisson’s use of point of view in “They’re Made Out of Meat”, the story would not be as entertaining as it is.

Work Cited

 Bisson, Terry. “They're Made out of Meat”

April 1991

Dictionary.com

http://dictionary.reference.com/browse/point+of+view?s=t

English Class Essay:Synthesis Essay

MaKenzie Beck

July 10th 2014

Synthesis Essay

The Hashtag Effect

            As a partial twitter user and fan of a good laugh, I was surprised at my ignorance when it came to the #CancelColbert campaign. I had no idea the drastic measures twitter users go through to feel as though they have been heard, but what is it they are sayinging? This question could have many answers, but the two following articles differ enough to express this point.  “#Cancel Your Outrage: Stephen Colbert In Not a Racist” by James Poniewozik and “The Campaign To “Cancel” Colbert” by Jay Caspian Kang are two articles that came out to address the “#CancelColbert” twitter hashtag. In his article Kang gives a detailed description of what occurred and how the purpose behind the hashtag was more to bring racism awareness to the American community then it was to cancel the show “The Colbert Report”. Unrelatedly, Poniewozik’s article only lightly touches on the “race” topic, while his main point is more about how twitter users are so quick to assume the worst and judge, with no thought of further research. I found these articles to point out two major flaws of today’s society, myself to be included: most of society does not tend to think about the effects of a funny joke with racial undertones or how quick we are to pass  judgment, through social media, without a thought to facts, though both definitely impact our society.

In their articles brought about by “#CancelColbert”, both Kang and Poniewozik address the issues of race and the misinterpretation of twitter, for society, but have little else in common. In his article, Poniewozik  views the “#CancelColbert” campaign as “A race to be the most offended first”, that is, who can be the first to win at being the most disgusted? and addresses the  hasty demand that trended on Twitter after a “Comedy Central account” under the name ‘Stephen Colbert’, tweeted “I am willing to show #Asian community I care by introducing the Ching-Chong Ding-Dong Foundation for Sensitivity to Orientals or Whatever,” a quote from one of Stephen Colbert’s skits meant to make fun of the Washington Redskins owner, Daniel Snyder and his foundation for “Original Americans”. But the tweet from Comedy Central lacked context and therefore was viewed as racist. Aside from explaining this, and pointing out that the whole skit the tweet came from could be considered racist by some, Poniewozik does not talk much about racism being a main issue. Rather, Poniewozik discusses, his disappointment at  how individuals on twitter were so quick to be offended by the tweet and then ready to judge instead of looking into further information on the subject or even Colbert’s history and credibility. Poniewozik credits this to, “the instantaneous urge ...to react fastest and most righteously, to...demand the greatest punishment, to … immediately assume the worst of somebody who crosses you the wrong way.” (Poniewozik), this is the mentality that the media world provides. With the interconnectedness of individuals through media one acquires a sense of authority and therefore feels has the right to demand an “instantaneous”“punishment”, even if it really isn’t called for. This instant need to express one’s undeveloped, uneducated opinion and demand justice is gratified by twitter use in today’s society and this, rightly so, is what upsets Poniewozik about the “#CancelColber” campaign.

In Kang’s article he addresses the same misunderstood tweet as Poniewozik, but instead of ranting about the misinformed social media community, his research led him directly to the issue of racism and it’s impact on society. Kang writes about how the “#CancelColbert” campaign came about by an Asian-American, writer, activist and twitter standout, Suey Park, who was identified by the Guardian for her efforts  in “top 30 young people in digital media.”. Kang explains how Park had read the Tweet supposedly from Stephen Colbert's twitter account, and been greatly offended, but despite the strategic hashtag she created, did not actually desire that the show “The Colbert Report” be canceled. Park

“saw the hashtag as a way to critique white liberals who use forms of racial humor to mock more blatant forms of racism. “Well-intentioned racial humor does not actually do anything to end racism or the Redskins mascot,” ... “That sort of racial humor just makes people who hide under the title of progressivism more comfortable.”’ (Kang).

That is to say, Park was pointing out that liberals were failing in their progressiveness as they attempted to use racial humor to make fun of others’ obvious racism, “Well-intentioned racial humor” is still racist and doesn’t make those who are racist change their minds. Kang continues his article stating that he understood the Stephen Colbert tweet to be a joke and as an Asian-America was not offended by it, but he does understand Park’s desire to bring racism awareness through her “#CancelColbert” hashtag. As Kang finishes his article he asks, “if those of us who find it distasteful know as much about the intentions of the hashtag activists as we think we do.” (Kang) And I would say, most of the time we don’t. Clearly some would think that “#CancelColbert” is simply a plea to cancel a TV show, but as we’ve seen, the underlining meaning was a call to raise racism awareness in today’s society!

Both Poniewozik’s “#Cancel Your Outrage: Stephen Colbert In Not a Racist” article and Kang’s “The Campaign To “Cancel” Colbert” address issues of society, but along with their main points, differ greatly in structure. When reading Poinewozik’s article I thought he took more of an opinion expressing approach rather than factual: “ Because what else did you need to know? What context did you need? The tweet was right there! Somebody retweeted it! People whose reactions I trust about this sort of thing are angry!” (Poniewozik), He expresses how society too often believes something simply because we trust who said it. But Poniewozik is, I feel, guilty of doing the same thing, his article lacks sources and has a take “take my word for it” tone that while reading didn’t feel the need to dispute , I found this to make him, despite the article being on “TIME”, uncredible.  While reading Kang’s article I felt well informed and thought he was credible because he stated the information, talked about his interview and then expressed his views from a professional and personal point.  It is my opinion that Poniewozik and Kang use their style of writing to attract the audiences they have, the “agree by persuasive tone” of Poniewozik and Kang’s “facts and opinion based” through these styles both authors grip societies attention.

I tend to place myself with society when it comes to the undertones of racial jokes and do not escape the fast opinion based on little information. I appreciated what Kang had to say in his researched article “THE CAMPAIGN TO “CANCEL” COLBERT”, about the “#CancelColbert” hashtag underlying racism message. And I tend to agree, and view myself guilty, of Poniewozik’s idea that with social media and hashtags people too often create an opinion based solely on the catchiness of a title instead of the actual facts in ”#Cancel Your Outrage: Stephen Colbert Is Not a Racist”.  The hashtag “#CancelColber, as we’ve seen can, was meant to bring carial awareness, but also brought to light the mentality people of have of passing judgment without any other reason than a catch title they think they should defend. In society we should take this, the underlying meanings,  into account the next time we see a controversial hashtag. It is up to society to try and understand the deeper meaning and effects though a little research before we take a “stand” on the topic.

KANG, “The Campaign to “Cancel” Colbert”

http://www.newyorker.com/online/blogs/newsdesk/2014/03/twitter-campaign-to-cancel-colbert-report.html

 Poniewozik, “#Cancel Your Outrage: Stephen Colbert Is Not a Racist”

http://time.com/42017/cancelcolbert-stephen-colbert-not-racist/

English Class Essay:Visual Rhetorical Analysis

MaKenzie Beck

Visual Rhetorical Analysis Essay

July 2nd, 2014

“Compassion in world farming”  A Visual  Rhetorical  Analysis Essay

While watching the campaign for “Compassion in world farming”¹, a cute video about free range farm pigs in the United Kingdom and their interaction with the London population through technology, my mind traveled back to my own happy experiences with the pigs I tended to growing up.  I was reminded of how cute pigs actually are, and the fun my siblings and I had raising them. As I watched the video I was excited to see the Londoners’ enthusiasm at the chance to feed the eager pigs with the use of a smartphone, interactive billboard, and a catapult machine. And for the first time, I understand the contrast, of the health benefits and worth of life, between a free range animal versus an animal raised in the cruel condition of caged life. I was affected by this video, after watching it I wanted to help the cause of free range animals! I wanted to do my part and make it my  personal goal to help all farm animals become free range! And then I realized, the video had succeeded in its purpose to raise awareness and convert  to the cause. Thus, a video campaign advertisement is a useful way of bringing awareness to the public because through the visual strategies²   and rhetorical appeals of one’s reasons (with logos), emotions (through pathos), and view of character (by ethos) can be persuaded.

The video campaign starts with a happy bluegrass-like song  and a lime green screen that reads, in bold white lettering, “Compassion in World Farming campaign for pigs to enjoy the freedom they deserve.”  This introduces the reason for the video, to help a specific purpose:   the well being of farm pigs.  The video then goes to show clips of pigs walking, eating,  and sleeping around  an open  grassy pasture  accompanied with facts about pigs  being “intelligent… social and playful..  and have dreams”. A contrasting, pink background, slide is introduced containing tabloids about horse meat found in hamburger and continues “we wanted to show why free range farming’s best”. Then the  video shows  how “The world’s first really live feed” was staged and describes how an interactive billboard in a busy London shopping center was linked to a free range country farm.  A slide then gives instructions on how to use a smartphone app to feed apples to the pigs on the farm. These instructions are reiterated  when the next clip shows a customer purchase an apple through the smartphone app and while facing the interactive billboard (that shows live footage of the pigs), moves her phone in a throwing motion, the feed machine on the farm releases an apple, a  “great throw” caption pops-up on the billboard, and the pigs enjoy the gift, all while the customer oozes with the excitement of feeding a pig miles away via technology. The video then shows clips of various individuals enjoy this same thrill and sharing the experience on social media. As the video comes to an end the same lime green and pink slides broadcast the results of the live feed event and express how “Londoners were reminded... that to eat free range is to eat happy.”  followed by one last head shot of an adorable pig and the logo for “Compassion in world farming” and “ The World’s First Really Live Feed”  to bring the video full circle.

The video influences viewers because its reasoning is easy to follow. I found the reason for this campaign message to be quite simple because the purpose, point blank, is to raise awareness about the benefits³ of free range farming. The video’s simplicity makes the message stand out through the use of text that unravels in turn, between clips, revealing the object, the facts, the reasons, and finishing with the results. This use of reading the word and seeing a clip has the ability to  stimulate the mind⁴ and fool the viewer, because the word presents an idea and the clip allows the subconscious to accept the word, based on the “seeing is believing”⁵ mentality, thus influencing the video’s viewer, with reason, towards the belief that free range farming is the better form of farming.

This video contains the power of persuasion because it appeals to human emotion without humanity being aware. When I first watched this video I only thought, “How cute!”, it was not until I started analyzing the work that I realized my reaction was the goal and that every detail of the video, from the colors and sound to the pigs themselves, was a strategic tool to break down any barriers my emotions may have built. The sound of the harmonica⁶ set the mood, my mind was automatically transferred to the idea of “country”. Then the use of the lime green⁷ and pink⁸ colors set the viewer up to accept new possibilities without judgement and called upon one’s insight, hope, and compassion. The Londoners featured in the campaign vary so much in age, that most people watching can in some way relate. Even the use of pigs is a technique of emotional appeal, rather than using other free range animals such as cows or chickens, pigs are used because our subconscious holds the childhood feelings stored from the stories like Charlotte’s Web and The Three Little Pigs⁹, where the pigs are cute and defenceless. The campaign also humanizes the pigs by giving them characteristics such as “intelligent” and “social” to help the viewers understand that the pigs are relatable, again appealing to one’s emotions..

The video campaign's last appeal is that of credibility, that is, the swaying of an opinion with truth. The video seems to be accurate when watching it in passing, but when taken apart and analyzed it becomes clear that more research is required to testify of truth. While watching the video we notice the contrast  between the positive idea of the free range pigs and the negative feel of the horse meat hamburger tabloids¹⁰. This contrast is the only opposition the video presents and if one see the video in passing one probably will not catch that there are many steps in meat processing¹¹ that occurs between farm and store, therefor even free range pork could end up mixed with anything! And though free range farming does seem like a positive, based on the video, the moral truth will always depend¹² on whom one speaks with and what they hope to find and believe.

The video campaign, “Compassion in world farming” is an adorable ad that brings one’s attentions to the benefits of free range pig farming while using the the nonverbal strategies and rhetorical appeals to convince you that it is the correct, more humane, form of farming. The video used logos to appeal to the viewer with reason, that is, an understandable point; the benefits of the pigs’ free range lifestyle. Then the appeal of pathos through the emotions touched by the visual strategies; the music, the color, the people, the animals, and in my case the memories. And lastly, Ethos was appealed by the truth given and not given in the video; the positive belief that free range pig farming is more humane for the animals, and the negative truth, that no matter how humane the raising situation may be, the pig will still be eaten.

1) Compassion in world farming video link

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6) “All I Want Is You” song by Barry Louis Polisar

7) Author, date, title unknown

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8) Author, date unknown, The Color Pink  

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10)  Felicity Lawrence (2013, October) Horsemeat scandal: where did the 29% horse in your Tesco burger come from?

Retrieved from: http://www.theguardian.com/uk-news/2013/oct/22/horsemeat-scandal-guardian-investigation-public-secrecy

11) Author, date unknown,  Livestock slaughter procedures

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